Saturday, February 3, 2007

Stains

‘Coz it just wouldn’t rain
The stains remain,
Dark stains of blood, sweat and pain
Curse this happiness
That I do feign

To see in your face,
That smile again…


‘Coz it just wouldn’t rain
The stains remain…

3 comments:

Unknown said...

so much pain expressed with such simplicity .. u gota keep ritin .. long way to go

Unknown said...

we say we cant describe pain in words... but u can! it connects with the reader instantly.. do keep writing

Madhura Chakravarty said...

This ones brilliant. Almost paints what you see ahead. Graphic images,and unblemished memories.
In the true sense,of the word..AWESOME!